My First Short Story Is Published!!

I wanted to let everyone know that I wrote a short story titled "The Bully"  I would appreciate it if you would visit the link below and let me know what you think about it.

"The Bully" is a story about a young boy that is nearly killed on his way to school one morning by the town bully. The boy's life is saved by an unsuspected character which allows the boy to seek revenge against "The Bully."